Nice stereo drum line. You could have used a less generic bass guitar IMO, it sounds almost like classic MIDI. The skeleton of the song is there. You have PROPER arrangement. Nice buildups, they're not too long. There's enough variation in the song structure to keep the melody from feeling repetitive. The melody at the end is a nice change up though. Try running all of your lead synths through a 10% reverb, then compress the high dB and expand the low dB post reverb. It will breathe life without stealing from the drums. I promise! Great work! Propz - Atomchild